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The story of Renate Wewerhoff: The Real Rip Van Wrinkle
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The story of Renate Wewerhoff: The Real Rip Van Wrinkle
The story is too lengthy to post. So here is the link.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Itwe...sp=sharing

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05-28-2018 02:31 PM
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Off to a good start, although I'm not familiar with the source material, so I fear I may be missing some details. Also there are a few typos (it's "sergeant", and you misspell Jeremy's name once), but those can be easily fixed. To be fair, the spelling and pronunciation of "sergeant" went through some discontinuity upon their move to English, much like "colonel".

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05-28-2018 04:43 PM
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RE: The story of Renate Wewerhoff: The Real Rip Van Wrinkle
(05-28-2018 04:43 PM)Ffydwyrr Wrote:  Off to a good start, although I'm not familiar with the source material, so I fear I may be missing some details. Also there are a few typos (it's "sergeant", and you misspell Jeremy's name once), but those can be easily fixed. To be fair, the spelling and pronunciation of "sergeant" went through some discontinuity upon their move to English, much like "colonel".

Thank you, and you do not need to know details of the source material To enjoy this series. When I do publish this, I have to erase all links of the Hellsing reference anyway (that includes the Rip Van Wrinkle part). When This is no longer a draft, I'll edit said errors and remove the Hellsing references. Big Grin

For those that are curious what happened before the story, I'll type up a prologue in a little while. It will be non-Hellsing related so I can publish it in the future. Big Grin Maybe if I ask Kouta Hirano in a kind manner, he might let me use the name Rip Van Wrinkle. Especially if I mention that it will be a homage to Hellsing. ^_^;

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